we discovered each other’s
aahhhh spots and
we owned them
aahhhh spots and
we owned them
isn’t that how we began
so long ago
so long ago
you lightly touched my back and i
stumbled
against your arm
stumbled
against your arm
then you stood facing
me, your face so
close
me, your face so
close
- so agonizingly close-
that my mind went
numb
that my mind went
numb
and your hot
breath flowed over
my neck making
every
nerve
in my body
burn for your lips there,
here,
anywhere, everywhere
breath flowed over
my neck making
every
nerve
in my body
burn for your lips there,
here,
anywhere, everywhere
and so……..
the apartment in the treetops
where our hands joined
our lips
on and in
where our hands joined
our lips
on and in
the aahhh spots
~
~
~
This was inspired by this week’s
prompt. The words are: apartment, began, numb.
paisley said,
March 13, 2008 at 5:34 am
oh that was delicious… that was always the best thing about being with the same man.. getting to know him… every inch of him… how exuberant this was!!!!
pia said,
March 13, 2008 at 6:53 am
I remember those days
Nice poem and super great title
welcome to 3WW
laane said,
March 13, 2008 at 4:36 pm
Very nice.
You can find my entry here: The Fire
Have a great day!
TC said,
March 13, 2008 at 8:18 pm
Some people like variety, but I believe there is something to be said for that level of comfort and knowledge.
Welcome to 3WW
gautami tripathy said,
March 13, 2008 at 9:55 pm
As someone said, with different person, each night is same and with the same person, each night is different!
Can it get any worse than this?
Sara said,
March 15, 2008 at 12:54 am
Wow, so sensual. I love it.
D-BB said,
March 15, 2008 at 9:58 pm
What is 3 WW? I am never welcomed anywhere.
zouxzoux said,
March 15, 2008 at 10:40 pm
Thanks to everyone with 3WW for your comments and encouragment.
D-BB: you are always welcome here.