you

**Be advised: this poem is explicit. If you’re under 17 or easily offended, stop now. :)** 

with too much time
on my hands all i do
is think of you
everything makes me
think of you
the violets are blooming in
my garden and my
desire is blooming
for you
i hear the roar of a truck
and i think
of you
lovers words in a song and
the sweet sound of guitar
and i think
of you
i pass the old building and
i think
of you
remembering our secret trysts
on the 6th floor…..
so hot, so urgent, so hurried
i want to be there now
with you
i want to see you every day
like i used to and be
with you
stolen lunchtimes in the
park
touching, sighing, kissing
we couldn’t get enough….
still cannot get enough….
i want your hands on me
desperately
urgently
i need to feel your hot, hard
throbbing need for me
your mouth on my tits
sucking me your fingers in me
your scratchy beard burning
my skin feels so good
the initial pain of you
entering me, spreading me
pushing into me hard
it’s
all
so
good
but all i can do right now
is remember and think
of you
until next time
soon, baby, soon

4 Responses to “you”

  1. paisley Says:

    well done.. and the one elongated line in the finish… perfection……

    it’s
    all
    so
    good

  2. zouxzoux Says:

    Thanks, P. I was a bit worried I’d attrack pervs with this one. :)

  3. geekbetty Says:

    I especially enjoyed these lines:
    “the violets are blooming in
    my garden and my
    desire is blooming
    for you”
    most people, when writing about desire, come across as campy. you didn’t at all. well done.

  4. zouxzoux Says:

    Ah, thanks Betty…..and thanks for visiting too.

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