idol

This poem inspired by Bone’s 3 Word Wednesday.

The words are:
Funny
Remember
Theatre

each day began with drama
watching for the ram, the black
sleek lines turning into the drive as
the roar of the engine made
funny little flutters in
my throat

i watched him walk up
the pastoral path
where birds sang and
ducks waddled and
fish jumped into the air with
the gleam of the early morning
sun reflecting off their scales
and into prisms that reflected
in my hungry eyes

the swaying trees provided
a theatre for his manly grace
as he walked toward
me and the flutters in my throat
matched the beating of the duck’s wings
as they flew, startled, before
his steps

and I remember how he
looked into my eyes at the
end of the pathway and
I was happy,
happy because the drama had
just begun

7 Responses to “idol”

  1. pia Says:

    Sometimes the horrible drama of life truly makes you want more, though I do wonder why

  2. whypaisley Says:

    i used to thrive on chaos,,, aka drama… now i am so boring,, i wonder how i ever had the energy… i guess it was all about love… or do you call that obsession……

  3. zouxzoux Says:

    why,Pia? Because drama, sex, love, passion…..these are the things worth living for.

    P. — it doesn’t matter whether it’s love or obsession. As long as I have it.

  4. Tumblewords Says:

    nice descriptions ~ wonderfully evocative writing

  5. gautami tripathy Says:

    I think we have a bunch of cynics commenting here in their own ways.

    Love is wonderful when it lasts..

    And I am no Cynic, being an aries female!

    slow demise

  6. TC Says:

    I love the end. Wonderful. Love is worth everything - even drama.

  7. zouxzoux Says:

    I humbly thank you, Tumblewords, after reading your poem for today. :)

    Gautami, love is wonderful no matter if it lasts a week or a decade. And I am an Aries female also!

    TC,
    drama makes it all the more tantalizing, eh?

    Thanks to all the wise women who commented here and I hope we continue to interact with each others poetry/blogs — it’s all so good!

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