the way i like it

your body presses against mine
and i feel
your prickly beard scratch
my neck

i feel
your chest crushing
my tits

i feel
your calloused hands stroking
my ass

and

i feel your hard, throbbing cock
pushing between
my thighs, impatiently

you roll me over and climb
on top of me in
one
swift
forceful
movement, lifting
my legs over your
shoulders and pushing
into me, hard

just the way i like it

I tried to use the prompts on 3 Word Wednesday on this…but I just couldn’t fit in the word “average”.

May 15, 2008
Categories: Love, Lust, New Orleans, Poems, Poetry, Relationships, Sensuality . . Author: zouxzoux

5 Comments

  1. Comment by whypaisley on May 15, 2008 7:40 am

    well honey,, that is because there is not a whole lotta room for average in the scenario you are creating!!! bravo… loved it!!!!

  2. Comment by writerkat on May 15, 2008 10:45 am

    I agree, there is nothing average about it. Nice job!

  3. Comment by san on May 20, 2008 7:38 pm

    :) i couldnt agree more with the comments above. i like the way it reads..

  4. Comment by zouxzoux on May 21, 2008 3:36 am

    Thanks all!

  5. Comment by TC on May 22, 2008 8:13 am

    I meant to get to this the other night (I didn’t participate until Sunday), but didn’t make it until now: glad I came by! :)

    And you know what? I think it’s quite all right that you skipped out on ‘average.’ Sometimes, it’s just getting the prompt to get writing. Besides, if you really wanted to fit in it: change the title to something like “The way I like it: wayyyy beyond average.” :-D

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