Bones’ writing prompts for today’s 3 Word Wednesday are “Deny~Smile~Uncomfortable”.
This one came easily to me today since I had been mulling some thoughts in my mind the last couple of days and the prompts fit in nicely. Thanks, Bone.
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some days
some days i’m happy and
i don’t give a fuck and
it’s easy to deny
some days i’m bitchy and
i ooz venom and
i’m uncomfortable in my
bones, in my skin, in my rage
some days i’m dreamy and peaceful
then i see you in my mind the way
it used to be and
i smile
and no matter how unconcerned
i feel on the happy days
or how venomous i feel on the bitchy days, i still
end up wanting when i think of you
on the peaceful days
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very intimate and true.. i see myself in that last line too closely for comfort….
Oh, my God, this is so true! I like the rawness here!
That was sweet and sad at the same time. I think most of us – or at least me – can relate to this a great deal.
Complexity is keyword. All of us are that way..
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That last stanza IS me. Nice job!
You detail the ups and downs and the changing screen of emtions. The narrator takes a philosophical tone, accepting the quickly changing emotional landscape. Who couldn’t relate to this humanity?
yes, that is exactly how love gone bad and he’s gone works..
mmmm…this poem had a rawness of emotion in it that I really enjoyed and appreciated! Excellent thoughts and sculpted poem!
Here is my 3ww:
http://amarettogirl.squarespace.com/the-written-word/
It’s impossible not to keep reading after that great first stanza.