Red

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Two brown eyes peer
through a back seat window,
gazing at the sparkling white
powder on the city sidewalks.
A small mittened hand swipes
a red runny nose then dips
quickly back into the pocket
of the threadbare rumpled jacket
from which it emerged.

Festive shoppers with bulging
bags walk gaily down the street
as the two brown eyes watch
in wonder. The family in the
old red Chevy is but a part
of the background of busy
streets and merry anticipation,

waiting at a red light as
the sputtering heater blows hot then
cold and the children sniffle and cough
the carol of the hungry and homeless.

Down the snowy street it chugs
straining on its last fumes to reach
the shelter where warmth and food
and one cold night off the streets
awaits if the line isn’t too long or
the shelter too full.
Belief is a word pregnant with hope.

~~~~~~~~~

Shared on Three Word Wednesday and on dVerse Poets Pub.

About Zouxzoux

Passionately curious. I write. I take pictures. I eat the best food in the world. I do it all in New Orleans.

20 thoughts on “Red

  1. Berowne says:

    Poignant, touching, well written…

  2. leah J. Lynn says:

    Yes, well said “belief is pregnant with hope” Amen

  3. ~L says:

    very deep! I too agree with length.. “belief is a pregnant with hope” !!! love that line!

    (I LOVE THE PICTURE ON YOUR HEADER!!! I WOULD LOVE TO BORROW IT FOR A POEM IF I MAY?)

    Lover your blog!

  4. zongrik says:

    nice contrast between the shoppers and the homeless

  5. Mary says:

    Lovely…belief is a word pregnant with hope indeed. I hear that loud and clear.

  6. wayne says:

    nicely done….thanks for sharing your words

  7. brian miller says:

    dang this is nice…lovely textures and great bit of story telling…like your close a lot too…nicely done….

  8. Zouxzoux says:

    Huge thanks to all for your lovely comments and for visiting my blog. May you all have a wonderful holiday!

  9. An important message for any time of year.

  10. Brendan says:

    Same season, same reds, same whites, divided by a wall of money. And in the end, one wonders which is the greater gift: a big toy under a big tree or a warm place to sleep for a change on a too-cold winter’s night. – Brendan

  11. claudia says:

    the children sniffle and cough
    the carol of the hungry and homeless…love how you paint the scene and great, warm and hopeful closure..

  12. Your poem captures an uncommon coldness of a colour usually associated with heat — the runny nose, the bereft shelter of a car, the forbidding light.

  13. Heaven says:

    This is a touching and poignant writing…I feel sad and moved by the images of despair and poverty ~

    Wishing you Happy Holidays and Cheers for the New year ~

  14. A touching and realistic poem. That last line is so powerful. So glad to read this.

  15. Sheilagh Lee says:

    you paint a picture so sad you only hope they find what they most need some help and then a job. to keep the family in a home

  16. wow! this is amazing! fierce penning full of raw imagery and vividness! bold and I applaud this one! bravo! love it!

  17. Zouxzoux says:

    Thank you all so much for your comments. Your thoughts validate that this poem was received as I intended. May you all have a peaceful and safe New Year!

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