An important first step along the path to a possible
tie-up: rake them into a pile and chop them up
because they keep the part of your brain that’s
only interested in rewards.
It’s the response to your anxiety that’s
helpful or hurtful, that tell-tale crusty texture
which signals that all the juice has been locked
inside. It took her four years before she opened
because she didn’t intend to be replicable.
But,
these problems pale in comparison to blatant
flip-floppery.
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Inspired by the Poetics prompt on dVerse Poets Pub.
You have a good point here. It IS the response to any given situation that is important.
Interesting take on the prompt. Flip-floppery… haven’t heard that in awhile.
it def is all in the response to the anxiety…and knowing how to respond because for many it crushes them…never anticipating it coming…flip floppery is a cool word…smiles.
You got it figured, Zoux! Make a decision, and move–forward! Nice write!
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Great lines:
“path to a possible tie-up”
“tell-tale crusty texture”
“she didn’t intend to be replicable”
I love the vagueness here that really makes the reader think and reread. Great parallel to the Poe short story, the body-bagging, the anxious giveaway. The brain does have immense control, and our best hope is to can control it—cut it up and bag it. All that pent up juice, inwardly trapped, can be dangerous though. When she’s cracked open, it’s going to gush. By the title and the text, I’m assuming she’s become very closed off to protect and control herself. Regard-less, without regard, “crusty” on the outside.
“Replicable.” So she’s keeping her uniqueness (and emotion) inside so that it can’t be captured, hurt, duplicated. Maybe.
Flip-floppery could mean going back and forth between decisions and convictions. Or it could just mean wearing flip-flops—they’re loud when you walk and draw attention. This girl is trying to go unnoticed.
Okay, now what does it really mean?
the part of the brain always interested in rewards -> and who bestows these rewards?
duty to challenge
Blatant flip-floppery! Such a great phrase–it should be used a lot more in our culture. Anxiety–the difficulty very originally expressed here. K.
Cool…I like this!
Excellent point. really like the way you poeticized. Flip-floppery, great term. Thanks
An intriguing write…I like the truth in the wiring of our mind for rewards and our anxiety over them.
Thanks for sharing your lovely thoughts in my blog ~ I appreciate them ~
Grace
very cool images to describe this…makes something that is very hard to grab very palpable…and i love..flip-floppery…
This was really interesting, I went back and reread a few times- I’m probably a million mikes away- but this spoke of our obligations to being seen as stable, emotionally stable- because society doesn’t recognise very well our anxieties- its seen as as something that should just be dealt with- as in ‘get a grip’. The flip flippery could mean the day to day doldrums- or the flip flop of an anxious palpitating hear. I really, really enjoyed this, made me think- challenged me. Sorry I’m a thousand miles away from the point! Stu mcp
Flip-floppery and indecisiveness always disrupt obligations, the most important one being truth to self, gaining a proper sense of self-awareness that we can carry thrunon our many other obligations. Intriguing way you have taken on the dverse prompt.
I love this, Zouxzoux. I have been meaning to come visit and read. I saw you have a couple of poems published. Congrats girl!
Pamela
Thanks, Pamela! I have had a great run with the publishing. I have one more coming up on May 4. Will link here when it hits.
Flip-floppery is a cool word and one I tend to associate with politicians.
Obligation and duty can be a heavy load, especially for older caregivers responsible for even older patients or family members. Sometimes the one being taken care of can be demanding and sometimes the caregiver thinks only of reward. Still, the dutiful are admirable, no matter their motivation, and preferable to unreliable assholes.
It can get complicated.
H/T to Mamma Zen for getting me thinking. ( http://mamaneedsshoes.blogspot.com/2012/04/moving-mary.html )
Thanks to all for your comments and musings.