Milisecond

sky

Milisecond

The warm sunlight falls

on my forehead,

cheeks and chin

and a smile

breaks open

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7 thoughts on “Milisecond

  1. Wowsa.

    I come to leave my Poetry Train Monday comments half a week after the new Train has pulled out. Sad.

    However, I’m glad to be here.

    This is a real gem.

    I tried playing with “forth” rather than “out”, but you are absolutely right.

    Out is best. And this poem is radiant and, in me at least, induces a smile to break out across a previously tired face. Thanks. And thank you for sharing this poem, too.

    Tschuess,
    Chris

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